I'm still reading and thanks already 😍. The paragraph directly under 'Oskar investment philosophy investment universe and investment product' looks like copy & paste (you suddenly talk about 'we') without a quote and at the beginning also something seems to be missing. Evtl directly fix 😘
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•Generally, you also have a 'we' in it more often in the further course. This is a bit confusing.
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@DonkeyInvestor have fixed a part. And somewhere also comes the c&p note
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@Koenigmidas honestly, I find it difficult to distinguish what is now from you / reflects your opinion and what is copy & paste and possibly (unverified) marketing contains. Had rather looked forward to a personal assessment / evaluation and less on copy & paste of content that I can also simply read at Oskar. Of course, your personal experience is also there, but partly well hidden and difficult to recognize. For me, therefore, overall difficult to read and the interesting / useful info for me (your assessment) difficult to identify.
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